1 写作要求
假定你是李华，你校今年暑假将为外国学生举办一场汉语夏令营活动（Chinese Summer Camp）。请你根据下面海报的内容，用英语给你的笔友David写一封电子邮件，介绍本次活动并邀请他参加。词数80左右。
Welcome to Chinese Summer Camp
Time：July 18th—July 28th, 2024
Place：No.8 Junior High School
Activities：
Study Chinese daily expressions
Know about Chinese history and culture
Visit the museum
Sign up (报名): Before July 2nd, on the school website
2 优秀范文
Dear David,
I’m glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture. Here is a piece of good news. Our school will have a Chinese Summer Camp. I’d like to invite you to join us. It will last 11 days from July 18th to July 28th, 2024 at No.8 Junior High School. We will have many activities, such as studying Chinese daily expressions, knowing about Chinese history and culture, visiting the museum, attending some lectures on Chinese history and so on. If you want to be part of it, please sign up for it before July 2nd on the school website.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
3 翻译、句子结构
I’m glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture.
我很高兴知道你对中国文化感兴趣。
主语(I)，谓语(am glad)，宾语(to know)，宾语从句(that you are interested in Chinese culture)。
从句主语(you)，谓语(are)，表语(interested)，状语(in Chinese culture)。
Here is a piece of good news.
这里有一个好消息。
主语(Here)，谓语(is)，宾语(a piece of good news)。
Our school will have a Chinese Summer Camp.
我们学校将举办一个中国夏令营。
主语(Our school)，谓语(will have)，宾语(a Chinese Summer Camp)。
I’d like to invite you to join us.
我想邀请你加入我们。
主语(I)，谓语(’d like to invite)，宾语(you)，状语(to join us)。
It will last 11 days from July 18th to July 28th, 2024 at No.8 Junior High School.
它将持续11天，从2024年7月18日到7月28日，在第八初级中学。
主语(It)，谓语(will last)，宾语(11 days)，状语(from July 18th to July 28th, 2024)，状语(at No.8 Junior High School)。
We will have many activities, such as studying Chinese daily expressions, knowing about Chinese history and culture, visiting the museum, attending some lectures on Chinese history and so on.
我们将有许多活动，例如学习中文日常表达、了解中国历史和文化、参观博物馆、参加一些关于中国历史的讲座等。
主语(We)，谓语(will have)，宾语(many activities)，状语(such as studying Chinese daily expressions, knowing about Chinese history and culture, visiting the museum, attending some lectures on Chinese history and so on)。
If you want to be part of it, please sign up for it before July 2nd on the school website.
如果你想成为其中的一部分，请在7月2日之前在学校网站上报名。
条件状语从句(If you want to be part of it)，主句(please sign up for it before July 2nd on the school website)。
I’m looking forward to your reply.
我期待着你的回复。
主语(I)，谓语(’m looking forward to)，宾语(your reply)。
4 句子逻辑
第一句表达了作者高兴知道对方对中国文化感兴趣。
第二句引出了好消息。
第三句至第五句详细介绍了夏令营的相关信息，包括时间、地点和活动内容。
第六句至第七句描述了夏令营的具体活动。
第八句提出了报名的要求。
最后一句表达了作者期待回复的愿望。
5 高分句型
I’d like to invite you to join us. (动词不定式作宾语）
If you want to be part of it, please sign up for it before July 2nd on the school website. (if引导的条件状语从句）
6 作文点评
优点
主题明确：文章围绕“邀请参加中国夏令营”这一主题展开，主题明确。
内容丰富：详细介绍了夏令营的时间、地点、活动内容和报名方式，内容丰富。
结构清晰：文章有明确的开头、中间和结尾，逻辑性强。
语言简洁：使用了简洁明了的语言，易于理解。
不足
词汇和句式多样性：虽然文章内容丰富，但可以增加一些高级词汇和复杂句式，以提升文章的表达效果。
深度分析：文章虽然介绍了夏令营的活动，但缺少对活动背后文化意义的深入探讨，如每个活动的具体目的和意义等。
