中考英语优秀范文-006 How to get on well with others 如何与他人相处融洽
1 写作要求
当今社会，与人交往越来越成为一种不可或缺的能力，作为中学生，学会如何与人相处尤为重要。假如上周你们班对 “如何与人相处” 展开了讨论，请根据以下的讨论结果，以
“How to get on well with others?” 为题，写一篇英语短文。
讨论结果
（1）尊重（respect）他人
（2）学会沟通
（3）乐于助人
2 优秀范文
How to get on well with others
As we all know, students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways?
First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.
In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy.
3 翻译、句子结构
As we all know, students should learn how to get on well with others.
众所周知，学生们应该学会如何与他人相处融洽。
状语(As we all know)，主语(students)，谓语(should learn)，宾语(how to get on well with others)。
But in what ways?
但是通过什么方式呢？
这是一个特殊疑问句，没有明确的主谓结构，询问方式。
First of all, we should respect others.
首先，我们应该尊重他人。
状语(First of all)，主语(we)，谓语(should respect)，宾语(others)。
Everyone has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other.
每个人都有自己做事的方式，所以我们应该相互理解。
主语(Everyone)，谓语(has)，宾语(their own way)，状语(to do things)；主语(we)，谓语(should understand)，宾语(each other)。
从句(so we should understand each other)作为结果状语从句。
Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.
此外，我们相互交流和分享快乐与悲伤是很重要的。
状语(Besides)，形式主语(it)，谓语(is)，表语(important)，真正主语(for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness)。
从句(for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness)作为真正主语。
What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.
而且，我们应该对他人友好，并给予那些有困难的人必要的帮助。
状语(What’s more)，主语(we)，谓语(should be)，表语(kind)，状语(to others)；主语(we)，谓语(offer)，宾语(necessary help)，状语(to those who are in trouble)。
从句(who are in trouble)作为定语从句修饰those。
In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way.
在我看来，我们应该以诚实的方式对待他人。
状语(In my opinion)，主语(we)，谓语(should treat)，宾语(others)，状语(in an honest way)。
Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy.
只有这样，我们才能相处融洽并感到快乐。
状语(Only in this way)，主语(we)，谓语(can get along well)，状语(with each other)，谓语(feel)，表语(happy)。
这是一个倒装句，正常语序为we can get along well with each other and feel happy。
4 句子逻辑
第一句作为引言，提出了文章的主题。
第二句提出了问题，引出下文的解答。
第三句至第六句详细列举了与他人相处融洽的具体方式。
第七句和第八句提供了作者的观点，并解释了这样做的好处。
5 作文点评
优点
主题明确：文章围绕“如何与他人相处融洽”这一主题展开，主题明确。
结构清晰：文章有明确的开头、中间和结尾，逻辑性强。
内容具体：作者提供了具体的建议和行为准则，使文章内容充实。
语言流畅：文章语言流畅，易于理解。
不足
词汇和句式多样性：文章中使用的词汇和句式较为基础，缺少复杂句式和高级词汇。
深度分析：文章虽然提到了与他人相处的方式，但缺少对这些行为背后情感和意义的深入探讨。
互动性：作为一篇作文，可以增加一些问题或邀请读者分享他们与人相处的经验，以提高文章的互动性。
